Syntax Afflictions Contest

I just LOVE sentences with syntax afflictions.

Here are two for your enjoyment. In a future post, I’ll mention the first person to send in cures for both of them.

His wife was in the studio, a radiating woman named Angela.

The bar was on the wall near the dining room, an oak cabinet on claw feet.


Tara Treasurefield
Tara’s Writing Studio


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I translate foggy information into plain English.
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